FINALY!
My poem check it out:
It is in portuiguese and the transulation may be a bit rought :/
45 minutes after i wrote what is above this line i finaly finished my master piece,i am going to slep so well the rest of the night
In broad daylight you are a star that shines
So much, that you eclipse the sun
Your gleam enchants but does not afflict
What god, deity or infernal demon
What power, what force or arcane magika
Could make such a immeasurably beautiful creature
Why?
Why is that?
That your voice reminds me of the birds of dawn
And their beautiful singing
Perhaps? Perhaps?
Passion? Love? Affection?
Because of the agonizing moments without your company
That tortured me and still tortures my humble and discreet existence
I write with fervor and delight
Waiting i will be for your answer
I made it all by myself
whit the help of a virtual dictionary:
[You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]And google transulator here:
[You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]Also i must say that i am greatfull to Luis de Camõens,Quack and every one else that helped me whit inspiration!
If this does not work i am giving up tryng to find my soul mate